David Rothnie

10 Responses to David Rothnie

  1. Carmen says:

    + I like your approach of drawing the graphs, I find it refreshing among all those Power Point slides.

    - However, I was a bit confused by the story you were trying to tell. I still don’t understand what influences what and I think it’s because of the way you chose to visualize the information.

    - Even though I like the idea of something hand-drawn, I still think using a software that would generate more accurate data would have been a good idea.

  2. Han Pham says:

    I like the simplicity.
    I also like the cross hatch pattern, which adds more texture than a solid fill, yet isn’t distracting.
    I like how you unified the story in the left-hand graph.
    The only comment is that I think the right hand graph feels somewhat extraneous compared with the story that you are telling in the other.
    Nice thinking.

  3. Sara Samford says:

    Hi David,

    I really enjoyed the aesthetic of your graphs. Looking back on the presentations, I think that maybe a pie chart isn’t the best format for the types of data you used and comparisons you were trying to make. Despite that and the fact that I was a little unsure about what the left hand graph was trying to convey – the image itself was quite powerful and immediately drew me in. I really WANTED to know what it meant and to figure out the story you were trying to tell.

    • David Rothnie says:

      Hi Sara, your totally right, I think I may have tried to over complicate the subject when I should have done a simple bar chart depicting noise pollution against quality of sleep. I also thought of a light hearted follow up to that depicting noise pollution against homicidal tendencies because those under grads drive me up the wall!

  4. Zach says:

    David,

    I enjoy the thinking that went in behind this.

    However, and I think much of this has been mentioned in the other posts or in class, I think you are trying to display qualitative data in a quantitative way. This ends up muddling the story and leaving the viewer a bit confused.

  5. olozano says:

    I like what you were trying to achieve but it definitely wasn’t the best option in terms of how/what it communicated. No need to tell you this, but when we ran into each other a couple of days ago it just made so much sense to put it as a simple bar chart depicting noise vs quality of sleep. It’s good to see some wild ideas even if they don’t work, though!

  6. Hi David, I love the hand drawn graphic and the use of colour. I also enjoyed reading your process and seeing how you approached the task – which was really unique, however I wonder if there could be a way of showing this without the explanation? Also I wasn’t clear (and I may be missing something here) how much your person actually spent – was it the expensive, standard or economical?

  7. Ruth Watson says:

    I like the simplicity of your hand drawn image, the table setting immediatly conveys food and eating out, and the message of your information is clear.

  8. John Toumpakaris says:

    Hi David,

    You definitely have a nice visual signature. I can verify that, NUS budgeting is not taking into account hectic weeks, where even the super-organized eat take away and microwave meals :D It would be interesting to see if you can mix this with other media (digital?) to make the text part of it more legible without having to add a separate table.

  9. You seem to be able to spot an interesting story but overcomplicate it a bit in your visuals! As with Han’s this has real potential and I can see it being the basis of a great photograph – for example if you took the same meal (say, spaghetti bolognese) and compared the cost etc of ready meal, eating out and home made, I think you’d convey the message much more simply and more visually than trying to “extrapolate”, which is always dangerous!
    So a great sketch for an art director to work with but remember what I told you the other week: KISS (keep it simple, stupid) – not that I’m calling you stupid, that’s just the phrase! ;)

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